Slip.

The ache began around 11 in the morning. A result of my negligence. I do not regret living with this ache, although I agree that avoiding it wouldn’t have been a tough task. I often let myself slip in the hard arms of misery. I often do that. As I sit now and feel the ache breaking me into two, I hear the cooing of an innocent bird, the cooing having no impact on me. It is as noisy as the noises these boys are making while they play their silly game. Perhaps, it’s the noises of these boys that’s making the melodious hum of the bird sound bitter. Perhaps, their noises aren’t actually noises, but to me, they appear so. Perhaps, I am struck by lightning or I am getting dragged across a swamp with pointy swords sticking out of it. I am waiting for the night so that I can truly become invisible for a while.

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13 responses to “Slip.”

  1. floweringink Avatar

    I love this piece!!!!

    1. Tomic Riter Avatar

      Thank you so much!! Much appreciated 💙💙

  2. SecretThoughts Avatar

    Wow. That ending… just wow.

    1. Tomic Riter Avatar

      Thank you so much! Apologies for delayed reply. Really appreciate you sharing your thoughts on this one 🙂 🙂

      1. SecretThoughts Avatar

        Not a problem Tomic 🙂

  3. Lia Avatar

    Missed you Tomic. Happy you’re here. Love your vignettes. I am going to try to write that A. review again. :)) 💛

    1. Tomic Riter Avatar

      Hey Lia! Yeah, the past few days were a bit busy. I read your words whenever and as often as I can and they are always refreshing. I do eagerly and patiently wait to read your review. Hope you having a good time 🙂 🙂

      1. Lia Avatar

        Thanks Tomic, oh, no worries! I didn’t at all mean you being absent from my blog! lol. Best wishes. :)) 💛

      2. Tomic Riter Avatar

        Oh i know. I can sound stupid when putting things in words haha. Keep flooding this digital realm with your words ✌️💙💙

      3. Lia Avatar

        Omg so sweet. 🙏💕 Thank you so much and no, please: that’s me!! (the sometimes-stupid-sounding one 😂) thanks again Tomic. I am so peeved about the review that they don’t include the whole thing in their rejection notice so I can just use it again with offending whatevers taken out. Also it took them a couple of days to reply to it. But we must battle on. :)) 😊🏹💃🏼

      4. Lia Avatar

        Hey again Tomic, just saw that my redo review (relatively clean and boring lol ;)) got published. Sadly it’s on French amazon. (I tried to do it on US or Canada but it wouldn’t let me.) Hugs and thanks for all your caring. I genuinely loved the book. It’s you. It’s beautifully done. It’s awesome. 💛

      5. Tomic Riter Avatar

        Hey Lia! I read your review just now on the sit, and it’s a real honour reading it. I am grateful to you 🙌❤️❤️ I wish you all the light and I hope I get to read more from you soon. Take good care 🙂 🙂

      6. Lia Avatar

        😚😚🙏🙏❤️❤️🙌🎉

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