Everything shaking.

a slit in the sky
orange bleeding over the hills
crows burst and scatter in the air
oh the howling growling wind!
and a dear dog rolling in ecstasy,
biting his body
stretching his body
sniffing the dirt
for that good moment.

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13 responses to “Everything shaking.”

  1. ramblingsofraven Avatar

    I can vividly imagine this scene. Beautiful!

    1. Tomic Riter Avatar

      Thanks a lot, friend! Really appreciate your comment 🙂

  2. Anish Nair Avatar

    Ha ha.. I’m picturing this in my head!!

    1. Tomic Riter Avatar

      Hahaha! I hope it was crazy.

      1. Anish Nair Avatar

        I’m still laughing 😂!

      2. Tomic Riter Avatar

        Then my job is well done 😆🙌🙌

  3. WildHeart Avatar

    ❤️

    1. Tomic Riter Avatar

      Thank you! ✌️🙌

      1. WildHeart Avatar

        Most welcome!

  4. grumpygorman Avatar

    I would love to share this on a poetry site of mine, if you’d be so willing.. 🙂

    1. Tomic Riter Avatar

      Oh please do! I am honoured really! I thank you from the heart in advance.

      1. Tomic Riter Avatar

        No words!! Love it ❤️❤️❤️

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