what a vibrant black evening!
what a wind!
what a tree!
what a clouds in what a sky!
what a colours orange yellow and blue
all turning grey
what a grey sky it will be soon!
what a white lightning!
what a kid getting blown away by the wind!
what a smell of fresh rain
gone before night
you are slow, what a slow you are!
almost disappearing
I am too, not as much as you
but I am too
again, what a wind!
what a sky without colours!
what a mute thunderstorm!
again, what a rain
and it is falling
what a murmuring of boring women!
what a boring play of blabbering kids!
what a boring crow
flying back to its tree!
what a useless me
watching and hearing all this!
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Tomic Riter 
What a word play!!!👌👌👌👌
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Thanks, mate!! Appreciate your feedback 🙌❤️❤️
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Wow, rich and complex mind you’ve got there. Take good care of it. 😉
Shared this poem here…
https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/05/16/what-a-what-tomic-riter/
Hope you’re ok with it. 😉
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Oh I am honoured again! 🙌🙌💙 Thank you so much!
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Take ‘er easy!
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Hmph! Said rueful-sudden-
smilingly, by girl-next-door.
What lit… what a boy!
What joy! What not!
What not a bore.
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Love the wordplay here! ❤️❤️
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😏🙏😄❤️
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p.s. I truly thought your poem wonderful and amazing. Very good literature.
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This being recognised as literature is a huge thing for me 🙌🙌🙌
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I have been reading quite a bit of venerated lit lately (offline, albeit skipping around in various books according to my usual ADD reading style 😁), so I do recognize it. :)) 🙌🙌💛
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🙌💙💙
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I love this one! I don’t know quite why but I relished this line in particular: “what a clouds in what a sky!”
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So glad to know 🙌🙌🙌 I write mostly in a breath haha. Really appreciate your reading it and sharing your thoughts 💙💙
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