The Big Dipper is right there where it was yesterday. A full spin has completed and that, among everything else, is still right there. Hanging. Swinging. Laughing at me from far. Laughing at my tiny miseries. Shining like a monster. Lifeless winning over Life. I am a mad man listening to Beethoven. His Sonata 14 is crushing my heart as I listen to it. I have no feelings in the manner in which you have them. Usually, I have no feelings. In this night, I am half on fire for no reason. I am looking at things and finding no pleasure in them. I am half on fire for you. Sweating at places. I am looking at things and the brightness that they are trying to emit and how fast all of that brightness is getting sucked by this nothingness, by you not being here. Where are you. I wonder that. Where are you. My single wondering for tonight. Where are you. Where are you. I have an idea but I do not know.
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Tomic, thank for following my blog. Otherwise, I wouldn’t be here and I would’ve missed the opportunity to read this masterpiece of yours. You truly blew my mind with your words and I’m awestruck!
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Wow I am really so so happy to know that!!! So happy to know you felt so reading it! Thank you a million times 🙌❤️❤️❤️
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It’s my pleasure 😇 And keep writing ✍️
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🙌🙌❤️
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When things are too much I don’t explode. I go numb. This piece right here is something really, this is making me numb right now.
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Thanks friend for reading and sharing your thoughts on this one 🙂 🙂
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Wow, this is all I can say. Truly, your works are wow.
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🙌💙💙 truly humbling 🙂 🙂
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WOW!! some fire up in here! No dryness. Or it’s burning… all light…. Such good writing… exciting… “I am a mad man listening to Beethoven. His Sonata 14 is crushing my heart as I listen to it.” Not just that but all the rest too. ‘Tis a true pleasure to read you.
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I love your comment! Really really appreciate it. Truly humbling 🙂 🙂
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😊🙏
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